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    Chelsea Johnson, Baxter Elementary School

    Running From Slavery

         The slaves were hard at work in the large fields.  They were burning with sunlight and steaming with sweat on their backs.  They kept working, to stay alive.  

         Louise Sunbell, age 12, was one of the few white people working.  She hated it.  She was the daughter of the owners.  She was treated unfairly, like the slaves were.  Louise considered herself a slave because she was treated like one and did all the same work they did.  She was put out on the fields to work and watch the slaves.  They were her friends.  She didn't boss them around, she helped them.  She hated to see her friends have to work in the fields and be burned from the sun, and dirty from the soil.  She had friends in the field, but wasn't allowed to talk to them while at work.  She wasn't allowed to talk to them ever!

         Louise pushed her shovel hatefully into the soil.  She missed being free and being able to talk to her friends, but now she couldn't.  She'd be in danger if she did. 

         The evening soon became night.  The air was cooling off and Louise was more tired than the day before.  The owners of the farm came out onto the field to tell the slaves to finish eating their piece of fruit and go to bed.  Louise was sick of the sound of hearing the owners treat them like animals.  Louise skipped her dinner that night and went to the barn hungry.

         Louise tumbled into the hay stack (her bed).  Louise was holding her anger inside herself.  She hated them, but she liked her friends.  Louise had an idea!  She would run away!

         "Brilliant," she said craftily.  Soon the whole state of Georgia was asleep, all except for Louise Sunbell.

         When Louise was sure everyone was asleep, she jumped off her high stack of hay.  Louise silently tiptoed over to Aira's bed (her best friend) and silently shook her awake.  Aira was frightened when she woke up.

         "Louise?" Aira said.

         "Shhhh!  Don't wake anyone else up!" exclaimed Louise in a whisper.  "I have an idea!  Let's run away from this place!  From slavery."

         "I don't know about this, Louise.  We could be in trouble!  We could die!" Aira said, frightened. 

         Just then, Peter, Thomas, Anna and Emma woke up gloomily from the loud noise Aira made when she talked.

         "What's going on?" Emma said.

         "Yah, what's all that noise?" Peter whispered sleepily.

         "Sorry, guys.  I was just talking to Aira, because I had an idea!" 

         Just then, they all heard the front door open from the house.

         "They're coming," Aira said, frightened and started backing away to her hay stack.

         "Everyone back to your beds!" Peter exclaimed softly.  They all scrambled back to their beds.  Just when the door opened, Mary James (the owner of the farm) stepped into the barn and looked around.  She shined a lamp into Louise's face.

         "Everyone's asleep!" Mary shouted back to the barn.  Then she left.  Louise and all her other friends opened their eyes.

         "That was close," said Emma.  Louise wiped the sweat off her face.

         Peter leaned on his elbow lazily and whispered, "I think we should run away."

         "I don't think we should," exclaimed Anna.

         "Listen!  Do you guys want to be stuck here your whole life or be free?"  They all looked at each other and then looked at Louise.

         "Ok.  Let's try it," they said.

         "Ok.  Everyone gather your belongings and meet Emma and me by the door."

         Soon everyone was gathered around the door.  They were all a little frightened and a little excited.  Louise pulled out a map she was given at school before she was a slave.
    Louise pointed to a spot on the map.

         "Here we are now," Louise dragged her finger across the map to a different place.

         "Here's where we want to be."

         Emma gasped.  "That's a long way to walk."

         "With Louise as our leader, we'll make it," said Peter.  Louise looked up, then smiled at Peter.  Peter was ten years old, and was the bravest ten year old Louise had ever laid her eyes on.  She looked back at the map.  Louise approached the door of the barn.

         "Remember, if you see the owners, hide!"  She reached and pushed the brown wooden old door open.

         "We will run; we will run fast, very fast.  RUN!" 

         Louise took off running to the opposite side of the yard from the barn.  Louise dove behind a bush.  Louise looked at the rest of the slaves sternly. She looked at the house where Mary and her husband lived.  She glanced back at Emma, Anna, Thomas, Peter and Aira.  She waved at them and they darted toward her and the green bush.  They reached the bush without being caught by the strict old Mary.  The ground was muddy and dirty.  The sky was black and the moon was a highlight in the air.  Louise held Peter's hand, considering he was the youngest of the pack of six.

         "Looks like we're going to have to climb the fence.  Emma, come here."  Emma walked over.  "Help me lift Peter up over the fence."

         Emma and Louise held their dirty hands together so Peter could step on them and climb over.  Peter had a hard time.  On his first and second try, he fell to the ground and started crying.  Louise told him to try  one more time.  He did.  Louise quickly grabbed his waist so he wouldn't fall, then she threw him over the fence in a way he would land on his feet.  Aira went over next.  She struggled to get over the wooden fence.  Louise gave her a little push over. 

         Soon they were all over the tall wooden old fence that surrounded the farm and gardens.  The slaves (soon no longer to be slaves) were running down the dirt pathway through the woods that surrounded the farm.  They were heading to what is now known as Wyoming.

         They kept walking along the path, and soon  eh sun was coming up.  The kids were tired and wrapped all around with sweat.  The sun kept getting brighter and brighter.  It was going to be a hot day.

         "I need a break!  I'm tired and hot, mostly hungry!" whined Peter.

         "We can't stop!  We need to keep going!" declared Louise.

         The forest became more gnarled each step they took.  The air became colder, because the trees were covering the bright sun.  Suddenly Emma stopped.

         "Are we going the right way?"

         "Positive," said Louise.  She took out her map and unfolded a piece of paper.  She pointed to a spot a little above where she pointed before, when they left.  It was close to evening, and they were closer to the end of the woods.  The moss on the ground had a sweet smell and the giant trees were as beautiful as a golden field covered in snow.  Louise's thin bony legs hit the moss softly as they continued to walk through the night.

         In the pitch black the kids were holding hands to stay together so they wouldn't get lost.  Emma yelled.  She yelled loudly.

         "A light! A light ahead!" She pointed to a light in a house near where they were.  Emma started running towards the light mindlessly.

         "No, Emma," Louise thought so strongly, her mind almost spoke for her.  She started running, but no.  She couldn't leave the others behind.  But not for long!  They started running after her.

         "Oh well, I guess they can come," said Louise to herself while running towards the house.

         "Emma! No!" yelled Aira and Thomas.  Emma got there.  She opened the door to the barn, and slipped inside.

         "No Emma! No Emma!" yelled Louise, twice in a row.

         "Something tells me I'll have to go get her!  I'll risk my life to save my friend," she thought deeply, almost letting tears roll down her cheeks.

         She shuffled her stiff feet and bolted forward toward the barn house, purposely leaving the others behind.  Louise kept running, slamming her feet into the frosted ground.  Tripping and getting back up from the rough ground, she reached the fence, leaping over it in one large jump.  Louise hid behind a thorny bush.  She waited about six minutes until all the lights were off, and everyone was asleep in the house. 

         She bolted yet again to the barn house, burning off her fury at Emma for running off like that.  Louise slammed the doors open, hitting the walls of the barn.  It was loud, very loud.  The lights shot on at the owner's house.  Louise's heart was pounding heavily in her weak chest.  She heard footsteps on the crunching frosted grass.  She had to warn Emma!

         Disappearing from the doorway inside, she looked for Emma furiously whipping her head in every which way.  Emma was huddled in a corner by a stack of hay.

         "We have to get out of here, Emma.  You were foolish to just run off that way.."  Then there were people standing at the doorway, all of a sudden they came out of nowhere.  They were the owners!  Louise gulped.

         "Stay low," whispered Louise.

         "No one's here, Mary," shouted the man, turning his head to a woman standing twenty yards behind him.  Soon he left and Louise heard a door slam shut and saw the lights turn off.  Emma groaned,

         "Thanks."

         "Let's go," said Louise.

         As Emma and Louise jumped over the fence, they saw Peter's scared face waiting for them.

         "Come on guys. Let's go." 

         They slept for thirteen hours and started in the early cold morning off on their journey.  They walked for days. They walked for nights.  They walked for hours.  They walked for minutes. It soon became night after thirty-two days of straight walking towards their destination.  Wyoming.

         The next morning, the sun rose over the mountains, and was soon smiling over the golden fields.  They arose sleepily and chilled to the bone.  Louise looked at her friends and smiled. Louise's smile soon became a frown.  She had a feeling something was wrong.  Peter was gone.  Soon all the kids realized the same thing. 

         Aira started crying.  Sobs fell down her swollen cheeks.

         "It's o.k.  We all feel the same way," Louise said, comforting.  "The only thing we can do is keep walking and look for him."

         Aira looked up at Louise with her large green eyes, which made Louise's stomach lurch for some reason.  They walked for twenty three more days.  Louise spotted a patch of small shaped rectangles.  Buildings.  Wyoming.

         "Look!" shouted Thomas with all his might, while pointing to a small sign off to the left of them.  It read, 
     

    Welcome to Wyoming

         They shouted and wept, hugging each other!  All except for Aira and Louise.  They missed Peter.  Suddenly, Louise heard footsteps running down the path through the woods.  Louise was scared, her heart pounding in her chest.

         "Everyone!  Hide!"  

         Everyone dove into the bushes except Aira.  She was too sad to think.  The footsteps came closer and closer, faster and faster.  Soon the kids hiding in the bushes heard a shrill.

         "Peter!  I can't believe it was you!  I was so worried!"  Louise came hobbling out of the bushes.  She saw the small face and the large shoes of Peter.  It was him.

         "Peter!"  She hugged him and kissed him on the head.

         "Come on guys!  Let's go to town."  They hopped and skipped to the dirt road leading to the town.  Crossing the street was a young girl around Louise's age.

         "Hi," said the girl in excitement.  "I'm Amanda."

         "Hi, I'm Louise and this is Aira, Peter, Thomas, Emma and Anna."  She pointed to the five kids standing beside her. They waved to Amanda with excitement.  Louise looked at Amanda and then back to the excited faces of the five kids.

         "Amanda, can I talk to you for a second?" Louise said seriously.

         "Sure."  Louise took Amanda's hand and walked over behind a tree.

         "What are they saying?" asked Peter.

         "I don't know," said Peter curiously.  Louise and Amanda came back side by side.

         "You guys," said Louise wiping her eyes, "you are going to have to go with Amanda and stay with her.  I have to go back to Georgia to rescue other innocent slaves."

         Louise hugged Peter because he was crying.

         "Bye, Louise," said Emma, while looking down at the ground. "Will we ever see you again?" 

         "Of course you will."

         The groups parted.  Peter looked back over his shoulder and saw Louise disappear into the horizon.
     

      The End

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